The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar diagram depicts the
number
of people who were in the Computer Science department in the years 2010 to 2012 between UK citizens and foreign admissions.
Overall
, it can be seen that UK women
are in the majority from 2010 to 2012. Additionally
, male pupils from the UK had a drop in number
but rose significantly.
To begin
with, the number
of admissions from abroad women
was significantly higher than abroad women
. For instance
, in 2010 the
British Correct article usage
apply
female
had a Fix the agreement mistake
females
number
of
over 30% which rose steadily and reached a proportion of 45. Change preposition
apply
In contrast
, Women
from another country had well under 15% in 2010. However
, the enrolled number
rose steadily reaching 20% in the year
2012.
On the other hand
, men from Britain stood at well over 40% in 2010, but this
percentage plummeted to 20% in year
2011. Furthermore
, the number
increased to approximately 45 per cent in the final year
.
Moreover
, the male foreign student's
Change noun form
students
number
showed an upward trend starting at a proportion of 20 where this
is
increased to reach approximately 40% in the Unnecessary verb
apply
year
2012.Submitted by Devika on
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