The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reevant.
The two layouts display the ways to reach a town hospital between 2007 and 2010. There were dramatic changes in how people reached the building. In 2007, patients coming from the west or east of the city avenue would find a junction and if they turned north, there was a
road
called the hospital
road
, along which there were 6 bus stations; three on the left and the other three on the right. On the east of the passageway, there was a car park for not only staff but the public as well.
At the end
of it, there was a T junction which led to the city hospital which was surrounded by a ring
road
. A drastic change to reach the building occurred in 2010. From the main route, there was a roundabout which led to a huge bus station if visitors went northwest and to the hospital
road
if they took north. On the east side of that street, the car park was only for employees
while
at the end
of it, the junction had been replaced by a roundabout with the main building on the north circled by the ring
road
with the public car park on the east of the main structure. In conclusion, the alterations were on the roundabouts replacing the intersections, the bus stations which became larger, and the parking lot which was separated between the staff and the visitors.
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