The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The multiple maps compare the vast development of Grange Park from its earliest year to the present.
Overall
, there has been an introduction to new facilities Linking Words
such
as a water feature, a cafe, an amphitheatre, a children's play area, and a new Linking Words
entrance
. Other than that, some places have changed their functions, Use synonyms
for instance
, the Linking Words
fountain
, the pond, the glasshouse, and the musician's stage.
In 1920, the Use synonyms
fountain
stood in the centre of the area, with a musician's stage on the western side. The park had two main entrances located in the middle south and north. On the left of the south Use synonyms
entrance
, there were Use synonyms
seats
and rose gardens, Use synonyms
while
on the right, there was a glasshouse and Linking Words
seats
. Moving to the north Use synonyms
entrance
, the buildings on the left were exactly the same as the south Use synonyms
entrance
. Use synonyms
However
, the right part consisted of a rose garden and a pond. In Linking Words
this
year, the Linking Words
seats
were distributed on many sides of the park.
In the current state, the Use synonyms
fountain
is demolished and rebuilt into a rose garden surrounded by Use synonyms
seats
on each edge. Now, the Use synonyms
seats
are no longer separated into many areas. The stage Use synonyms
also
redeveloped into an amphitheatre for concerts and the glasshouse became a water feature. Linking Words
Furthermore
, in the northeast, the rose garden has been changed into a cafe and the pond into a children's play area. Linking Words
Finally
, there has been construction of a new underground Linking Words
entrance
located on the west part of the water Use synonyms
fountain
.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words entrance, fountain, seats with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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