The graph below shows the spending of UK residents on visits abroad between 1993 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the spending of UK residents on visits abroad between 1993 and 2013.

 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the graph line
illustrate
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the
amoount
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amount
of money
spend
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spent
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by
uk
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UK
residents on going
out side
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outside
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the country over
ten
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a
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years
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ten-year
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period
amoug
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among
four
cateloge
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category
groups .
overall
, it is
clean
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clear
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that the holiday is the most money gone on it during the period .
while
the miscellaneous was the
leaste
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least
.
at
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the
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beginning
beginng
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beginning
, the
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • steady increase/decrease
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • notable rise/fall
  • economic conditions
  • currency exchange rates
  • international tourism
  • disposable income
  • consumer behavior
  • trend analysis
  • data points
  • historical context
  • inflation-adjusted spending
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