The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams depict the old structure of a public
park
when it first opened in 1920 and how it is now after some refurbishment.
Overall
, it is clear that
there is effective utilization of spaces to further
offer different activities and services for visitors.
In 1920, the old park
contains
two entrance gates in the back and front sections, lines of seats in each corner, three rose garden areas, Wrong verb form
contained
stage
for musicians and Correct article usage
a stage
fountain
in the middle of the Correct article usage
a fountain
park
. Moreover
, a pond for water plants and glasshouse.
Currently, the park
offers numerious
activities, including three entrance gates, Correct your spelling
numerous
cafe
shop, Correct article usage
a cafe
children's
play area, and Correct article usage
a children's
water
feature. The added gate was meant to direct Correct article usage
a water
visitor
to the Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
new
Change the word
newly
add
water feature at the right corner of the Wrong verb form
added
park
. In the right section, there are also
children's
play area and Correct article usage
a children's
cafe
shop in front of it. In the Correct article usage
a cafe
middel
the is a large rose garden surrounded Correct your spelling
middle
with
seats. Change preposition
by
In
the left, there are Amphitheatre for Change preposition
On
Correct article usage
the concerts
concerts
area and another rose garden.
In summary, the new structure Change the noun form
concert
cater
for Change the verb form
caters
large
number of Change the article
a large
the large
visiors
, offering them Correct your spelling
visitors
unique
experience and easy access.Add an article
a unique
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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