the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrated maps represent changes
Correct pronoun usage
that occured
occured
in a Correct your spelling
occurred
3 years
time frame around the roads accessing the City Hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Correct your spelling
3-year
To begin
with, there are three major changes was
observed in Unnecessary verb
apply
this
time frame. Firstly
, multiple roundabouts were installed providing easy accessibility to the Hospital. Secondly
, removal
and Replace the word
remove
adding
a bus station west to the hospital road using two supporting roads, opposite Wrong verb form
add
to
the staff parking. Change preposition
apply
Thirdly
, the staff parking and public parking are segregated by changing it
location east to the Hospital.
Change the pronoun
its
Overall
, It can be observed the
some drastic change Correct your spelling
that
occured
between 2007 and 2010, providing Correct your spelling
occurred
occurs
a
easy Change the article
an
road accessible
infrastructure in Add a hyphen
road-accessible
3 year
frame.Add a hyphen
3-year
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