the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrated maps represent changes
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occured
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occurred
in a
3 years
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3-year
time frame around the roads accessing the City Hospital in 2007 and 2010.
To begin
with, there are three major changes
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observed in
this
time frame.
Firstly
, multiple roundabouts were installed providing easy accessibility to the Hospital.
Secondly
,
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and
adding
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a bus station west to the hospital road using two supporting roads, opposite
to
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the staff parking.
Thirdly
, the staff parking and public parking are segregated by changing
it
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location east to the Hospital.
Overall
, It can be observed
the
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that
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some drastic change
occured
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occurred
occurs
between 2007 and 2010, providing
a
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an
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easy
road accessible
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road-accessible
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infrastructure in
3 year
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3-year
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frame.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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