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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
population
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 of the world is increasing day by day . The table illustrates the number of citizens in millions for four nations in 2003 and predicted numbers for 2025 and 2050.
Overall
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, Indonesia is the
country
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 with the highest number of residents in the beginning and remains as same till the final years. Meanwhile,
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initially
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initially,
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 Argentina had the lowest number, but it is predicted that Italy would become the nation with the lowest in the end.
Firstly
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, Indonesia is the only
country
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 among these 4 having a nine-digit
population
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. It is recorded that in 2003 they had 238
million
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 people living in Indonesia, and it is said to increase to 274 and 312
million
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 by the years 2025 and 2050 respectively.
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, Argentina
also
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 shows an increasing trend. In 2003 only 34
million
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 people were residing in Argentina. But the projected numbers for 2025 and 2050 show
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steady growth in
population
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 with 48 and 62
million
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 respectively.
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, The Republic of Korea had a strength of
population
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 of 48
million
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 in 2003, but it is said that only a rise of 4
million
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 will happen in the
country
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 and it will remain the same throughout the years.
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, Italy is the only
country
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 with a negative trend in
population
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 growth. It had a 54
million
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population
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 in 2003 , but it is predicted to lose its
population
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 by 7
million
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 in 2025 and
further
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 a 2
million
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 more by 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, country, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected figures
  • population growth
  • decline
  • initial population
  • highlight
  • differences
  • compare
  • expected changes
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • entire period
  • contributing factors
  • birth rates
  • immigration
  • economic conditions
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