The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table illustrates the Grange
Park
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map in 1920 and present which is located between Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street.
Overall
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, what stands out from the pictures is that the area became significantly less greeny over the years, having more focus on entertaining activities for the public.
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, some parts remained without changes throughout the prescribed century, but have had some improvements. Environmently-friendly seat areas and the rose garden at the left of the Eldon Street entrance were demolished and replaced with the amphitheatre for concerts, covering almost a quarter of the
park
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.
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, the rose garden and the pond for water plants on the north-east of the
park
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were replaced with more attractive constructions for families
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as a cafe and children’s playground.
On the other hand
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, the fountain was replaced with a more ecological rose garden in the middle of the
park
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with four additional seats around.
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, car parking lots were expanded by creating a new area under the
park
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, which can be reached from the entrance under the newly designed water activities which were built
instead
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of the glasshouse.
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