You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates data about Paris Metro
stop
for travellers.
In overview, people in Paris are travelling from six o'clock in the morning until 22:00. Correct subject-verb agreement
stops
This
is clearly explained by the fluctuations shown Change preposition
in
on
the picture.
Change preposition
in
To begin
with, human
beings Correct article usage
the human
waited
at the station were not less than ninety during the whole day, Wrong verb form
waiting
however
, from 6 am there were about 100 pupils and there was a gradual rising up to the maximum level of the graph of approximately 400 humans in only one hour. Correct your spelling
Additionally
Additionaly
, from 08:00 am, there was a constant decrease until it reached below 200 people around ten after midnight, Correct your spelling
Additionally
therefore
, around 12:00 up to 15:00 a steady increase was experienced at the Paris Metro station.
Moreover
, passengers started to decline again from 3 in the afternoon and hits it's lowest point of less than 100 vacationers and it was around 4 pm. Lastly
, there were lots of fluctuations all over the time, which means that passengers were found at the station during the day compared to eveningSubmitted by cajaah93 on
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