You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates data about Paris Metro
stop
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for travellers. In overview, people in Paris are travelling from six o'clock in the morning until 22:00.
This
is clearly explained by the fluctuations shown
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on
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the picture.
To begin
with,
human
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the human
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beings
waited
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at the station were not less than ninety during the whole day,
however
, from 6 am there were about 100 pupils and there was a gradual rising up to the maximum level of the graph of approximately 400 humans in only one hour.
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Additionally
Additionaly
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Additionally
, from 08:00 am, there was a constant decrease until it reached below 200 people around ten after midnight,
therefore
, around 12:00 up to 15:00 a steady increase was experienced at the Paris Metro station.
Moreover
, passengers started to decline again from 3 in the afternoon and hits it's lowest point of less than 100 vacationers and it was around 4 pm.
Lastly
, there were lots of fluctuations all over the time, which means that passengers were found at the station during the day compared to evening
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • rush-hour peak
  • commuting
  • sharp drop
  • midday
  • gradual increase
  • afternoon peak
  • gradual decline
  • late evening
  • sharp decrease
  • number of passengers
  • reach its highest point
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