A pie chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at lea
The given chart and table
demonstrates
about travellers at a specific layoff centre in Australia.
Correct subject-verb agreement
demonstrate
Overall
, percentage
of Europeans is the highest, Correct article usage
the percentage
US
is slightly lower, Correct article usage
the US
meanwhile
amount of Asians is Add a comma
meanwhile,
smallest
and Correct article usage
the smallest
other’s
proportion is twice less than tourists from Europe.
Correct article usage
the other’s
Firstly
, percent
of visitors from Europe is 37%, and they prefer 16 day holiday by “Camping and Caravan” including bathing, Change the spelling
per cent
while
American
Correct article usage
the American
sightseers
proportion is 35 Change noun form
sightseer's
sightseers'
percents
and most of them choose Fix the agreement mistake
percent
14 day
rest at Add a hyphen
14-day
4 star
hotel inclusive sightseeing.
Add a hyphen
4-star
Secondly
, portion
of Asian travellers is 10%, Add an article
a portion
the portion
whereas
percentage
of tourists from other countries is 18%. People from Asia prefer 1 week break period at Add an article
the percentage
5 star
hotel which includes sightseeing, Add a hyphen
5-star
meanwhile
visitors from other countries choose Add a comma
meanwhile,
10 day
rest by “Camping or Caravan” Add a hyphen
10-day
that
includes surfing.Correct pronoun usage
which
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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