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The chart below shows residential water use in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows residential water use in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts present the comparison of
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use
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 in British households in the years 1998 and 2008.
According to
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 the data, In 1998, there were only five activities using
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 but over the past ten years, the pool has been the new activity added to
household
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water
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 usage. There are significant changes in the
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use
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 percentage. Bathrooms became the majority of
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 usage in 2008,
while
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laundry
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 decreased to the same level as car washing. In 1998, There were five
household
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 activities using
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. A quarter of residential
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 usage was
Laundry
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, at 25% of the total.
This
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 was followed by Bathroom and Garden at 22% and 20% respectively. The
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 used in Car washing was higher than that of the Kitchen by 3%.
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, In 2008, there was a significant change in residential
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-using
behaviors
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.
Laundry
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, which was the largest
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use
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 in 1998, was overtaken by Bathroom, which increased by 6% from 22% in 1998 to 28% in 2008. Notably, The
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 consumed in the kitchen rose sharply from 15% in 1998 to 20% in 2008, making it the second-highest
household
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water
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 consumption in 2008. The level of
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 used in
laundry
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 declined to the same level as car washing, at 18%, which remained essentially unchanged from 1998.
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, the Pool was new to
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water
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use
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, at 9%, and the garden showed a remarkable fall to a minimal 7% in 2008, which was the lowest of
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, household, laundry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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