The chart below shows residential water use in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows residential water use in the UK.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts present the comparison of
water
use
in British households in the years 1998 and 2008.
According to
the data, In 1998, there were only five activities using
water
but over the past ten years, the pool has been the new activity added to
household
water
usage. There are significant changes in the
water
use
percentage. Bathrooms became the majority of
water
usage in 2008,
while
laundry
decreased to the same level as car washing. In 1998, There were five
household
activities using
water
. A quarter of residential
water
usage was
Laundry
, at 25% of the total.
This
was followed by Bathroom and Garden at 22% and 20% respectively. The
water
used in Car washing was higher than that of the Kitchen by 3%.
However
, In 2008, there was a significant change in residential
water
-using
behaviors
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.
Laundry
, which was the largest
water
use
in 1998, was overtaken by Bathroom, which increased by 6% from 22% in 1998 to 28% in 2008. Notably, The
water
consumed in the kitchen rose sharply from 15% in 1998 to 20% in 2008, making it the second-highest
household
water
consumption in 2008. The level of
water
used in
laundry
declined to the same level as car washing, at 18%, which remained essentially unchanged from 1998.
Additionally
, the Pool was new to
household
water
use
, at 9%, and the garden showed a remarkable fall to a minimal 7% in 2008, which was the lowest of
this
record.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, household, laundry with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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