The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of one nation’s exports in different sorts in 2015 and 2016. The table depicts the rate of variation in each item of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Overall
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, both in 2015 and 2016, petroleum
products
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were the most important item for exporting,
while
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textile was the lowest value among the goods. All categories were increased in 2016 except gems and jewellery.
According to
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the table, the most dramatic change in category is dedicated to textiles with 15.24% followed by engineering goods with 8.5% is the second level in the table.
In addition
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, agricultural
products
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had little change with 0.81% but gem and jewellery dropped by 5.81%. Alternatively, petroleum
products
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had grown by just 3%. In the bar chart, petroleum
products
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with just over 60 billion dollars were the most profitable product for export in 2015 and 2016,
while
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textiles were the lowest value with around $26 billion and just over $ 30 billion in 2015 and 2016 respectively.
However
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, in 2016 the value of exporting textiles was similar to agricultural
products
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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