You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
#minutes #line #paris #metro #station #passengers #summarise #information #report #features #comparisons
The given line graph illustrates the
number
of passengers
who use the Paris
metro
station
at different hours of the day commencing from 6 o'clock in the morning to 10 o'clock at night. Overall
, it can be seen that the number
of commuters fluctuated throughout the given time. However
, the rush hours of Paris
metro
station
are 7:00 and 18:00.
Firstly
, according to
the graph, Paris
metro
station
working hours started from 6:00 and at that time the number
of passengers
was 100 persons. It then
rose dramartically untill 7:00, when it reached a peak of 400 travellers. After falling sharply, the number
of passengers
increase again until 12:00, where it is stabilised at 300, with minor variation until 14:00.
After morning rush-hours, the number
of passengers
fell steeply to just under 100 passengers
in 16:00. This
dip nevertheless
gave Paris
metro
station
the lowest number
of passengers
during a day. Although
, it recovered again and reached anothere peak at 18:00 with about 380 passengers
, which is approximately similar to the morning peak. Finally
, it dopped again to anothere low point of just above 100 commuters and then
fluctuated until the end of the period.Submitted by Nastaran_zandy on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, paris, metro, station with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
▼