The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the
the
household income in five Remove the redundancy
apply
countries
that is
spent on food
and drink ,housing, clothing and entertainment. It is clear that
U.K. Workers spend the most on housing with 37% due to
the high population compared to size
Correct article usage
the size
the
country
Change preposition
of the
To begin
with food
and drink, Turkey takes first as highest
nation that Correct article usage
the highest
spend
on it with 37% Change the verb form
spends
percent
of their gross income,Change the spelling
per cent
However
, Germany is the least country that spends on food
and drinks, probably because German's farming and agriculture is
more developed than Turkish's, Change the verb form
are
Nonetheless
, German employees spend on clothing and entertainment more than all the other countries
in the table above.
Secondly
, Spain and Turkey pay the lowest on
housing, Change preposition
for
due to
low
demand Correct article usage
the low
on renting
in the two Change preposition
for rent
countries
,In addition
, Spain and France are also
the least countries
that
workers spend their money on clothing.
Correct word choice
where
To conclude
, the prices of food
and drinks is
the highest in Spain and Turkey Correct subject-verb agreement
are
due to
the significant
high percentage of their income Change the adjective
significantly
that is
spent on it.Submitted by yazanalt523 on
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