The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came form and the chars show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The police savings for 2017 and 2018 are shown in two statistical diagrams, in which we can see where came by and what was invested , the report is measured in millions of pounds, and the data is extracted from a British area.
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, the chart represents three main factors that make the budget mean: the National Government, money obtained by paying taxes, and other sources. It can be seen an increment to 2018 in all the donors. Linking Words
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, the National Government improved the payments by 10 million pounds approximately. The total difference between these years is 13 million pounds.
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, the pie diagram depicts how was use the budget, there are three categories Linking Words
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as the wages of Police personnel, Technology, Buildings and transport. It is remarkable that there are no changes in Buildings and transport Linking Words
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salaries have suffered a considerable decrease of 6%. Despite the salaries being reduced, another important area of the Department is being improved. Linking Words
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, the technology efforts have increased in the Linking Words
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