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The table below gives information about the UK's top 5 exports in 2020 and the percentage change with the previous year. The bar chart shows the percentage of UK exports sent to the EU between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the UK's top 5 exports in 2020 and the percentage change with the previous year. The bar chart shows the percentage of UK exports sent to the EU between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
UK
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's top 5 exports in 2021 and the percentage
change
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 with the previous year. Meanwhile, the bar chart provides information on the percentage of
UK
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 exports sent to the EU, throughout the period 2000 and 2020.
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,
while
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 the percentage of the USA exportations to the
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 has experienced a decline, electrical
vehicels
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vehicles
 represented the top five
export
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exports
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 to the
UK
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 during the periods. In 2021, electrical
vehicels
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vehicles
 ranked number one as the most shipped item to the
UK
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, reporting 28bn and
annual
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an annual
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change
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 of (-40%).
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the
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second place,
gold
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is gold
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, representing 20bn and
an
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a
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 yearly
change
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 of (-10%). Followed by jets, with 20bn and (-25%) of
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 yearly
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.
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, medication and petroleum reported 19bn and 17bn with an annual
change
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 (+1.5%) and (-32%), respectively.
On the other hand
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, the bar chart illustrates, the
number of
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exportation rate, which has
fall
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 gradually, dropping from 6% in 2010 to 40% by 2020.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, change, bn with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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