The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart from a report dated 2008 compares the
energy
usage generated from six different sources, in the USA. The record begins in 1980; predicting the statistics till 2030.
Overall
, there has been an increase in fuel consumption which is projected to follow the same trend till the end of the period.
While
fossil fuels have contributed the lion's share to
energy
generation,
however
, renewable sources have consistently been the least utilised. In 1980, petrol and oil were consumed the maximum, holding their position till 2030. In the beginning few years,
this
fluctuated around 35
quadrillion
units
, which in 2000 saw a marked rise, a trend which continued till 2005, reaching over 40
quadrillion
units
, after which it plateaued till 2020. In recent years, it once again has been on the rise and is predicted to reach its peak, with just under 50
quadrillion
units
utilised, in 2030. Coal and natural gas conversion follow a parallel trend,
although
, only about half of their amount is used, compared to petrol and oil. Only under 5
quadrillion
units
of each - nuclear, solar
and
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wind, and hydropower generated
energy
was consumed,
while
their usage mostly remained steady, utilisation of nuclear power gained popularity compared to hydropower, which is
also
the only one among all to reduce in
energy
production, dropping below 4
quadrillion
units
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, quadrillion, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • trends
  • marked increase
  • dominant source
  • modest increase
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • nuclear energy
  • noticeable decline
  • span
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
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