The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts
illustartes
the improvement of tools Correct your spelling
illustrates
illustrate
of
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for
Stone
cut
and how it Replace the word
cutting
affect
in Wrong verb form
affected
stone age
in two different Correct your spelling
Stone Age
period
.
Change to a plural noun
periods
Overall
, in the past people use
cutting tools which take out a big part Wrong verb form
used
from
Change preposition
of
Stone
specifically Correct article usage
the Stone
middle
side. Correct article usage
the middle
Moreover
, at
the Change preposition
in
last
period
there Add a comma
period,
is
a significant improvement Wrong verb form
was
of
cutting tools, Change preposition
in
while
side
Correct article usage
the side
view
thiner
than in Add a missing verb
was thiner
first
period.
Change the article
the first
In a
one million and four Change preposition
A
hounderd
Correct your spelling
hundred
years
ago Stone
shapes in cutting was
semi tringular, which means in both Correct subject-verb agreement
were
front
and back Correct article usage
the front
view
there shape was thin Fix the agreement mistake
views
in
first 5 cm Change preposition
at
then
got wider.
In eight
Change preposition
Eight
hounderd
Correct your spelling
hundred
years
ago there was Correct article usage
a different
different
in cutting Replace the word
difference
Stone
, were both
front and back Correct determiner usage
the
view
bigger than Fix the agreement mistake
views
Stone
in
1.4 million Change preposition
apply
years
ago , but there side view
was thinner than it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
1.4 Change preposition
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
years
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