The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The table chart illustrates the
amount
of goods
carried by different types of transportation ( road
,water, rail, and pipeline) in the United Kingdom between 1974 and 2002.
Overall
,the highest amount
of goods
transported
Add a missing verb
was transported
on
Change preposition
by
road
,and there was increase
in the Add an article
an increase
the increase
amount
of goods
carried by road
and on
boat over the given period. Change preposition
by
While
the lowest amount
of goods
transported by pipeline.
On the one hand, the number of goods
carried on the road
was around 70 million
tonnes
in 1974,
and dramatically increased to just under 100 in 2002. Remove the comma
apply
While
the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
goods
carried on Add an article
the boat
a boat
boat
was under 40 Fix the agreement mistake
boats
millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
in
the beginning of the period, by 19869 it had increased to about 60 Change the preposition
at
million
tones
, before it dropped to about 50 Correct your spelling
tonnes
million
tonnes
, and increased to above 60 million
tonnes
in 2002.
On the other hand
, the number of goods
transported by pipeline was the lowest under 10 millions
in 1974 Change to singular
million
then
gradually increased to above 20 million
tonnes
in 1982, and slightly decreased to exactly 20 million
tonnes
in 2002. while
goods
carried by rail started at 40 million
tonnes
and remained the same over the period given.Submitted by saja.alotaibi on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, goods, road, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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