The line graphs show the percentage of people using public transport and people using private cars in five cities of Australia from 2000 to 2010.

The line graphs show the percentage of people using public transport and people using private cars in five cities of Australia from 2000 to 2010.
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The present line chart compares the proportion of people who used public transport in 5 different cities of Australia namely, Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Perth, and Adelaide between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, the number of public
transportation
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users in Brisbane and Sydney was increasing in the period of 10 years;
however
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, other towns did not have any visible alternative.
According to
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the graph, the first city in 2010 that used public
transportation
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was Brisbane by 27%, yet
this
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city from 2000 to 2002 had third level by 15%;
therefore
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, the trend had moderate change.
Nevertheless
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, the first city which used public
transportation
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was Sydney with 20% in 2000;
then
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, the line rose slightly to 24% in 2009
finally
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, in 2010 the percentage was absolutely the same as in 2009, and cached up to the second level.
Although
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, Melbourne, Perth, and Adelaide respectively, for using public
transportation
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had altered rapidly.
In addition
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, the percentage at the beginning was the same as the proportion in 2010. Melbourne at the start had 18%, and in 2004 touched the minimum, but from 2005 to 2006 peaked;
then
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became the same as in 2000. Perth was stabilizing, but from 2004 until 2007 had a maximum of 11%. Adelaide had waves.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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