The graph shows the number of fatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table compares information in percentages about the injuries leading to death of workers in New Zealand throughout 2 years, in 1992 and 2011.
Overall
, what stands out from the gathered data is that occupations such
as roadway incidents, homicide and falling to a lower level were the most dangerous over the years. Nevertheless
, contact with electricity, suicide and drowning also
took place.
In 1992, the most vulnerable area was a roadway, causing 18 per cent of incidents. Furthermore
, over almost two decades its numbers considerably rose by 6, reaching 24% in 2011. On the contrary
, although
homicide had second place in 1992 with 17% of shares, statistics dramatically decreased to 9% in 2011. In addition
, fatal figures falling to a lower level fluctuated over the years, significantly growing from 8% to 12%.
On the other hand
, contact with electric power affected 5% and 3% in 1992 and 2011 respectively. However
, the number of individuals selecting suicide increased noticeably, with 2% and 5% in
turn. The least influential factor was drowning, having a decreasing trend that stood at 1 per cent in 2011 comparably to 2% in the previous year.Change preposition
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