The graph shows the number of fatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of workers in New Zealand who experienced fatal
injuries
resulting in death in 1992 and 2011.
Overall
, roadway incidents accounted for the highest percentage of fatal injuries
in both years, while
drowning had the lowest percentage.
In detail, roadway incidents represented the highest cause of fatal injuries
, with just under 20% in 1992, increasing to just under 25% in 2011. Homicides were responsible for around 16% of fatalities in 1992, decreasing significantly to around 10% in 2011. Falls to lower levels were the third most common cause, affecting about 7% of workers in 1992 and rising slightly to just over 10% in 2011.
Conversely
, injuries
caused by contact with electricity and suicides both remained under 5% in 1992 and 2011. Drowning incidents also
remained minimal, with under 5% in both years.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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