the graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

#information #report #consumption #energy #usa #projections #summarise #features #comparisions

The given line graph illustrates the USA energy resource data from 1980 and forecasts for 2030.

Overall

, there were upward trends in the consumption of all sources over 30 years. Fossil fuels exhibited the highest consumption amount,

whereas

the opposite can be seen in renewable ones. Regarding nonrenewable sources, in 1980, standing at 35

quadrillion

units

, the highest volume belonged to petro and oil, followed by natural gas and coal with 20 and nearly 16, respectively. After fluctuating over the next 15 years,

this

figure significantly increased to 42

quadrillion

units

and was expected to rise continuously to 47 in 2030. Natural gas and coal showed erratic patterns from 1980 to 2015; coal is projected to grow to 30

quadrillion

units

while

natural gas will stabilize. Referring to environmentally friendly power, nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower shared the same level in 1980, at 4

quadrillion

- just one-seventh compared with petroleum and oil. These figures for nuclear and solar/wind moderately grew and were forecasted to reach 8 and 6

quadrillion

units

in 2030, respectively. The quantity of hydropower generated was uneven over three decades and will continue at

this

level until 2030.

Submitted by cathyngo1512 on Sat Jun 22 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words quadrillion, units with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

191 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is betger to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In life, bad situations, such as unsatisfactory job or financial problems are inevitable and we must deal with it no matter what. It is often argued that the best way to handle a difficult situation is by accepting it, while others disagree and think that it is better to not give up and improve such situations. This essay agrees that the right way to deal with a bad situation is by fighting instead of submitting to it.
4
band
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparisons
The above graph depicts the rise in population of Urban cities such as The Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia. The information was gathered for the research during the years of 1970 and 2020, with the graph also depicting the expected population in 2030 and 2040.
6
band
In the future all cars, busses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In the era of globalization, technology and artificial intelligence have been involved in the driving industry. Therefore, in the coming years, all vehicles will be driven by AI. Individuals will not take a lead in the car. I have a balanced opinion on this argument. In this essay, I will elaborate on the pros and cons.
5
band
Food travels thousands of miles from farmers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for our environment and economy if people consumed locally produced foods. To what extent do the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages?
Thanks to modern technology and development in transportation facilities, shipment of food ingredients has become much easier. As some opine consuming domestic foods is more environment friendly in addition to being economical, I suppose this point of attitude goes a long way.
5.5
band
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is neccesary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
There is an opinion that it is quite vital to teach children how to discern good and bad at an early age. As a matter of fact, the most effective way to teach them that is to use a punishment system. This essay agrees with such a belief and deems that punishment should be taken in the framework since violence, sometimes, does not have the right clout on children at all.

the graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is betger to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparisons

In the future all cars, busses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Food travels thousands of miles from farmers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for our environment and economy if people consumed locally produced foods. To what extent do the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages?