The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram clearly demonstrates the
process
by which sugar
is made from sugar
cane. Overall
, it is evident that the process
contains 7 stages, three of which take place in a farmland and others in a manufacture.
To begin
the process
, sugar
canes are cultivated for 12-18 months in farmlands before harvesting. As for the second step, canes are harvested either by agricultural machinery or by hand. Subsequently
, the harvested material is transferred to a manufacturer to continue the process
.
Looking at the third stage, canes are put in a crushing machine, making them crushed and turned into juice. For the fourth step, the juice is purified by going through a limestone filter. After making syrup out of the purified juice by an evaporator, sugar
crystals in the syrup are then
separated by a centrifuge. To complete the procedure, sugar
is dried and cooled down, after which it is ready for consumption.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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