The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts provide data on the total proportion of films released and the total portion of ticket sales in two different years.
According to
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the figures, drama films were by far the highest during the dates and increased from just above the quarter in 1996 to 35 per
cent
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exactly in 2000.
Next,
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the second largest film percentage was comedy - it made up a fifth of the total in 1996 and grew up to around a quarter in the year 2000.
By contrast
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, tickets sold to comedy films reached a fifth of the total in 1996 and
then
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grew a little to almost 23 per
cent
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at the end
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of the 20th century.
Furthermore
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, sales for romance comprised the minimum - only 5 per
cent
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in 1996 and went down to a mere 2 per
cent
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in 2000.
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, it is evident that the most preferred genres were drama and comedy both for ticket sales and for film releases.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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