The given bar chart illustrates the shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States,United Kingdom, Japan and Canada in the year 2009,
It is clear that
the U.S has the highest expenditure on Housing with an approximate percentage of 26%.
First of all, Japan Linking Words
seem
to have a high cost of food Change the verb form
seems
due to
the significant rate of spending on food,Linking Words
However
, Japan's transportation Linking Words
shares
is the least Fix the agreement mistake
share
from
all five countries.
Change preposition
among
Secondly
, the Linking Words
U.S
and the Correct your spelling
U.S.
U.K
spend the most on clothing compared to other countries in the bar chart, Correct your spelling
U.K.
this
means that clothing Linking Words
advertisement
is Replace the word
advertising
effectiveness
in these two nations.
Replace the word
effective
To conclude
, every country should have an Linking Words
exaggerate
cost for some services Change the verb form
exaggerated
due to
increased demand from one period to another.Linking Words
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