The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The given bar chart illustrates the shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States,United Kingdom, Japan and Canada in the year 2009,
It is clear that
the U.S has the highest expenditure on Housing with an approximate percentage of 26%.
First of all, Japan seem
to have a high cost of food Change the verb form
seems
due to
the significant rate of spending on food,However
, Japan's transportation shares
is the least Fix the agreement mistake
share
from
all five countries.
Change preposition
among
Secondly
, the U.S
and the Correct your spelling
U.S.
U.K
spend the most on clothing compared to other countries in the bar chart, Correct your spelling
U.K.
this
means that clothing advertisement
is Replace the word
advertising
effectiveness
in these two nations.
Replace the word
effective
To conclude
, every country should have an exaggerate
cost for some services Change the verb form
exaggerated
due to
increased demand from one period to another.Submitted by yazanalt523 on
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