Two pie charts and the table describe
dividing
of the police budget in one area of Britain between different proposes and sources in 2017 and 2018. The budget encompasses three sources which are National Government, Local Taxes and others like grants. Correct article usage
the dividing
And after
getting the money it shares Correct word choice
After
for
three main aims: Salaries for officers and staff, Technology, and Building and transport.
The paramount part of the money obtains from the government with Change preposition
apply
lightly
increasing from 2017 to 2018 (175.5 Change the word
light
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
and 177.8 Use synonyms
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
respectively). The second source is the local taxes, which Use synonyms
rised
significantly from 2017 to 2018 (91.2 Correct your spelling
rose
raised
rise
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
and 101.3 Use synonyms
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
respectively). The Use synonyms
last
one is the line that called others (grants etc.) that mainly stayed stable (38 Linking Words
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
and 38.5 Use synonyms
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millions
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million
of
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apply
pounds
respectively).
The essential part of the money Use synonyms
spends
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is spent
for
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on
wage
of officers and staff, with declining of 6% from 2017 to 2018 (75% and 69% respectively). The second part is the maintenance of the buildings and transport, Fix the agreement mistake
wages
that
stayed unchanged - 17%. And the Correct pronoun usage
which
last
one - technologies - gained from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018.Linking Words
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