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he table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

he table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table presents data on exchange
students
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 between universities in six European countries and
Australia
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 in 2007 and 2009.
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,
France
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 sent the highest number of
students
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 to
Australia
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,
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 the UK sent the fewest. European universities received the most Australian
students
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 in
France
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 and the fewest in Germany. In 2007,
France
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 and the Netherlands sent the most
students
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 to
Australia
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, with 61 and 36 respectively,
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 Germany sent the fewest at 27. By 2009, German student numbers surged to 63, second only to
France
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 at 62, with Sweden increasing to 42.
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, the total number of
students
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to
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Australia
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 rose by 226. For Australian
students
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, the total number going to Europe remained stable at 152. In 2009, numbers
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France
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 and Germany increased to 58 and 26,
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 those
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 Sweden and the Netherlands decreased to 27 and 18. In summary, student exchanges to
Australia
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 increased significantly,
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 exchanges to Europe remained steady with shifting preferences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, australia, france with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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