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The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050 To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Not mine)

#situation #teacher #students #class #year #mine
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The present teaching
methods
 and the student's learning will change in the next three decades.
This
 essay totally agrees with
this
 statement because the
students
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 requirements increase
according to
 the
continue
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 development of
the
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technology
year
 by
year
 and the new studies of teaching
methods
 that match the new generations.
The teaching
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 across the world witnesses
a huge changes
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huge changes
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of
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cirrculames
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curriculums
, ways and tools of teaching so
the
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teacher
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teachers
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 start using smart factors . the
students
 grew up with smart devices
surrounded
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 them though they can't understand the old way
methods
. They find information easily and
by
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 fun clips on social media that's why the educational institutes try to covey all these requirements.
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, Finland replaced all paper books with E_books by giving the
students
 iPads to enhance them to read easily.
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, the new generation acquisitions become more specific they like more colours
,
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 and prefer visual classes to understand the information fast which leads the teacher to present a modern class and a more communicational method of teaching by using more technology
as
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 clips, pictures, audio and activities inside the class. adding to the online classes become more variable like
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, Google Meet, etc... all
this
 will lead to developing the typical class
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 the new Apple iPad version presents
a quick solutions
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quick solutions
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 for all kinds of maths problems in one click and the AI that gives the
students
 ability to make a research in 5 minutes . In conclusion, by 2025 the teaching typical
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teacher
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 and
student
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 will change because of the development of AI
year
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 and the learning modern requirements of the new era that will lead to
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 level of teaching
methods
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introduction conclusion
Ensure the introduction clearly states your position and outlines the main points you will discuss.
logical structure
Enhance logical flow by using appropriate linking words and phrases between and within paragraphs.
supported main points
Support your main points with more detailed explanations and examples.
complete response
The essay provides a complete response to the task, discussing changes in teaching methods and student learning by 2050.
clear comprehensive ideas
The ideas presented are clear, and the essay uses relevant examples such as Finland's use of e-books.
introduction conclusion
The essay effectively concludes by summarizing the main points and restating the position.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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