The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following
process
diagram illustrates how glass
material is recycled using a flowchart.
Firstly
, the recycling process
is shown in 6 steps, starting with glass
storage in the bin and finishing with the transformation and adjustment to new recipients to be delivered by trucks to stores. In addition
, this
is achieved by applying physical treatment such
as water and fire.
Subsequently
, the process
starts with the reception of glass
in specific containers, in which a kind of truck transports the material to specialized companies that change the resource. The first process
implies the cleaning of the bottles and the elimination of microorganisms that could be hazardous.
Finally
, in step 4, the bottles are held into a mechanical machine that destroys them and the pieces are exposed to high temperatures until the solid structure of the glass
becomes liquid. This
substance is taken to a new machine that fills a bottle model. Thus
, the recycled material is fitted.Submitted by sebastianher18 on
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