The graph shows the population of india and china from year 2000 to the present day with projection for grownth to the year 2050
The given chart illustrates
predicted
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the predicted
population
of two
greatest countriesCorrect article usage
the two
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,
that is
India and China from 2000 to 2050.
Overall
, despite China's higher number of
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population
at the starting point, interestingly, experts predicted that Indian citizens will increase dramatically, moreover
, it will reach a higher point than China.
Regarding Chinese citizens, originally, China’s government reported that they had the highest number of
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population
with 1,250 billion
people
. However
, it will go up slightly until in
2030(1,450 Change preposition
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billion
people
) and the prediction says that it will decline remarkably.
In contrast
, although
India started from approximately only 1,000 billion
people
in 2000, it have
increased dramatically and will be Change the verb form
has
the
same position Change preposition
in the
with
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as
Chinese
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the Chinese
population
in 2030(1,450 billion
people
) and it will rise more without stop
.Change the form of the verb
stopping
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