The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. TASK 1
The bar graph illustrates the change that happened in the period 2008 among graduates and postgraduates later relieved from UK universities by excluding the full-time workers.
Overall
, The volume of students who participated in graduation showed the highest involvement in all activities such
as part-time job
, voluntary Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
work
, further
study
and unemployment, while
post-study
study
sharply declined through the year subsequently
did not exceed the lowest count of voluntary Correct word choice
and subsequently
work
in graduate activity.
The majority juniors
Change preposition
of juniors
given
higher priority to Add a missing verb
were given
further
study
which peaked up to
29665 in the year 2008. Change preposition
at
Moreover
, the second most popular was part-time reached till 17,735. Additionally
, the amount of unemployment rose to 16235 slightly less than half-day employment. Nevertheless
, voluntary work
displays the least significant undeveloped field around 3500 proportional to other sectors.
After all, postgraduate interest in sectors other than full-time represented the least contribution throughout the year. In the meantime,none of them ever exceeded the lowest bothered voluntary work
in the graduate list but the one that reached the highest level was the further
study
category (2725). Rest all made up the lowest size including part-time , unemployment and voluntary work
to 2535, 1621, and 345 respectively.Submitted by kiruthikakannan.pid on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, study with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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