The table below shows the percentage of adults aged16 and over who participated in various activities in the four weeks prior to interview in the United Kingdom in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where Relevant
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The given table
illustrate
information about the Change the verb form
illustrates
proportion
of popularity in difference
activities in adults aged 16 and over during four weeks. These data were acquired by interview.
Replace the word
different
Overall
it is clear, the
most total average was the largest figure for the item Correct word choice
that the
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
labeled
“at least one activity”. Walking was the second Change the spelling
labelled
the
largest Correct article usage
apply
proportion
of population
. Add an article
the population
Football
and weigh
training Correct your spelling
weight
were
nearly the same and the least popular activity Change the verb form
was
between
all Change preposition
among
population
. Cue sport and cycling popularity were as equal. Most females and males participated in other items Fix the agreement mistake
populations
Correct pronoun usage
that was
was
not separately listed and walking. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Football
and weight
training were the least popular in female
, Fix the agreement mistake
females
while
yoga and weight
training accounted for the smallest proportion
of males’ participant
.
The Fix the agreement mistake
participants
most
average total Correct quantifier usage
apply
participant
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participants
was
stood at 64%, Unnecessary verb
apply
while
football
and weight
training was
lower Correct subject-verb agreement
were
nearly
5% and 6%, respectively. Cue sports and cycling are equal to 11% Change preposition
by nearly
in
Change preposition
of
total
Correct article usage
the total
population
. Football
and weigh
training were the least popular in Correct your spelling
weight
total
Correct article usage
the total
population
. The largest proportion
of females are
participated Unnecessary verb
apply
other
items were not listed at just over 7o%, Change preposition
in other
silimarity
that of females stood at nearly 60%.None of Correct your spelling
solidarity
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the woman
woman
participated in Fix the agreement mistake
women
football
. The least
percentages Correct word choice
lowest
was
Change the verb form
were
weight
training and cue sport
nearly equal at 3 and 4, respectively. The smallest Fix the agreement mistake
sports
percentages
of Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
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the males
males
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male
population
was come
from Change to the active voice
came
has come
weight
training and yoga stood at average
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an average
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, population, football, weight with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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