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The graphs below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the
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-year refurbishment plan of an airport site.
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it is clear that
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 not only the whole site will be expanded but
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 more facilities be introduced to provide convenience for travellers. Looking at the upper side of the map, the airport has currently 8 gates, which will see an increment to 18
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 the expansion of the area.
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, the same area will accommodate the sky train, replacing the path dedicated to a walkway.
This
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 shift will offer easier and faster access to different gates.
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, just next to these trains, several shops will be opened. In terms of what stays unchanged, security, passport control and customs can be mentioned.
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, the room in front of them undergoes several changes, as an ATM, and a car hire, will be added.
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 the airport accommodates
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 cafe at the moment, another
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 will be added. As far as doors are concerned, they will surge in number, changing from just
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 for departures and
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 for arrivals to two for each.

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