The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by the UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.
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departed
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in the period between 1979 to 1999, Correct your spelling
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as well as
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the most famous countries visited by Change the verb form
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residents in 1999. Correct your spelling
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, the amount of visiter
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visitors
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were increasing in 1999. France was the most visited country by UK
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abroad
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residents highly more than visits Correct your spelling
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