The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
activities
of jobless persons in the UK in the previous year.
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Overall
, both unemployed males and females spent most of their time throughout the Linking Words
day
doing house chores, running errands, socializing, and hunting for a job, Use synonyms
while
less time was being consumed sitting idle or doing miscellaneous Linking Words
activities
.
In the early hours of the Use synonyms
day
, about 3 folds more women had been engaged in domestic work than men, who outnumbered women in Use synonyms
job
search. The same trend could be observed in the late hours of the Add an article
the job
a job
day
as well, Use synonyms
however
, during Linking Words
this
time, the percentage of women seeking job opportunities had increased to be almost equal to men. Interestingly, both genders preferred to stay more indulged in social Linking Words
activities
in the afternoon compared to the morning hours.
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In addition
, a striking difference between the number of males and females taking Linking Words
interest
in gardening is Correct article usage
an interest
also
a prominent feature of Linking Words
this
table. A considerable male headcount took pleasure outdoors taking care of the plants Linking Words
in contrast
to even less than a quarter Linking Words
members
of Change preposition
of members
opposite
gender carrying out Correct article usage
the opposite
this
activity. Linking Words
Moreover
, both genders equally enjoyed some pastime Linking Words
activities
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all
Correct pronoun usage
apply
through
the Change preposition
throughout
day
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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