The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
activities
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of jobless persons in the UK in the previous year.
Overall
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, both unemployed males and females spent most of their time throughout the
day
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doing house chores, running errands, socializing, and hunting for a job,
while
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less time was being consumed sitting idle or doing miscellaneous
activities
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. In the early hours of the
day
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, about 3 folds more women had been engaged in domestic work than men, who outnumbered women in
job
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the job
a job
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search. The same trend could be observed in the late hours of the
day
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as well,
however
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, during
this
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time, the percentage of women seeking job opportunities had increased to be almost equal to men. Interestingly, both genders preferred to stay more indulged in social
activities
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in the afternoon compared to the morning hours.
In addition
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, a striking difference between the number of males and females taking
interest
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in gardening is
also
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a prominent feature of
this
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table. A considerable male headcount took pleasure outdoors taking care of the plants
in contrast
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to even less than a quarter
members
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of members
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of
opposite
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the opposite
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gender carrying out
this
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activity.
Moreover
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, both genders equally enjoyed some pastime
activities
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all
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apply
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through
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throughout
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the
day
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, day with synonyms.
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