Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the presence of transactions of

money

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from the

internet

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can support

people

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to transfer a wealth of salary to friends, family, and businesses. Many

people

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argue that

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the transfer

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of funds is easier compared to taking a plethora of

money

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from the bank. Personally, I entirely reckon that it is a positive development

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several reasons. On the one hand, the obvious adverse

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of

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, countryside dwellers find it difficult to transfer

money

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in light of the fact of signal problems.

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is because

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the suburbs, the signal of the

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experiences problems as

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apply

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public facilities are still limited. Notwithstanding

foregoing

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, it is generally known that governments should fund a lot of

money

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to improve developing villages, particularly increasing

internet

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signal in order to aid local

people

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to

take

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make

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money

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. To demonstrate, taking

money

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from the automatic machines which connect to smartphones could help

people

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get paid from it if they forget about the card. Taking a more comprehensive view, numerous crimes have increased significantly in

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apply

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enormous cities

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the

internet

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and smartphones

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give

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detrimental effects

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societies,

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as online fraud. It is evident that most individuals who dwell in the capital city often suffer from cyber fraud which results in loss of

money

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.

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, Citizens are

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deceived by several applications on smartphones which

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cause bad things, like online automatic

machines

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hacking. To illustrate, since the pandemic era, more and more individuals

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have

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witness

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drawbacks in light of digital deceit.

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, authorities must be responsible

about

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this

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case as they provide networked networks and automatic machines for local residents.

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, the government should create regulations

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law enforcement to tackle these issues. To recapitulate, it seems to me that both the World Wide Web and

mobiles

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mobile

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phones

is

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a paramount need for

citizenry

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the citizenry

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owing to the fact that it affords beneficial advancement to save but

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takes

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money

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easily and safely. I assume that it is not as essential as the

needs

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for online transactions can be more convenient but

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more accessible.