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The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line
graph
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 illustrates the global
population
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 growth and a prediction from 1800 to 2100, and the bar
graph
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 shows the number of
people
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 in million from 2015 to 2040 in different regions.
It is clear that
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 over time, the
population
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 has only increased.
However
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, predictions say that, in the future, the
population
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 will decrease significantly.
Also
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, considering the forecast, most growth will happen in developing countries.
According to
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 the line
graph
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, we can see that from 1800 to 1930, the figure for world
population
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 increased steadily, from one
billion
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 to two
billion
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people
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.
Then
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, it sharply rose to a peak of 7.5
billion
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people
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 by 2020. Projections show a continued increase in
population
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 in the near future, but from 2040, the
population
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 will start to fall rapidly to 6
billion
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 in 2100. Looking at the bar
graph
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, we can see that the number of
people
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 who live in developed countries was fixed at approximately 1.2
billion
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 and predictions say it remains stable through the period shown. Interestingly,
according to
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 the forecast, the
population
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 in developing countries will continue to increase, from 2.2
billion
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people
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 in 2015 to 4
billion
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 in 2040.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, population, people, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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