You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter, say who are you give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in relation to a small accident that occurred at Walmart to
Change preposition
apply
me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
last
weekend. I am Navneet kaur
, Change the capitalization
Kaur
resident
of the nearby building named Correct article usage
a resident
as
Collin. I visit Change preposition
apply
this
supermarket most often to buy my clothes and groceries and finds
most of the things perfect.
Correct subject-verb agreement
find
While
purchasing the groceries last
Saturday, in the frozen section I found that everything seemed to be little
wet and slippery. As soon as I Correct article usage
a little
step
ahead suddenly, I fell on the floor and realized that the glass of that section was broken. I Wrong verb form
stepped
got
minor injuries on my arms and legs and won’t be able to do my job for 15 days. I had Verb problem
have
accident
at the supermarket, I saw many elderly people shopping and were at high risk as well.
Add an article
an accident
Hence
, I request to maintain the safety standards for the customers because a major accident could be proved harmful for
the goodwill of the shopping Change preposition
to
center
Change the spelling
centre
along with
the life risk to visitors. I recommend you to
inspect all technological instruments with professionals. Fix the infinitive
apply
Moreover
, some more highly skilled staff is also
required and safety procedures should be followed strictly.
I think you will take my complain
into careful consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Replace the word
complaint
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coherence cohesion
Try to avoid repetitive phrases to enhance clarity and conciseness.
task achievement
Make sure to use formal language throughout the letter to maintain a professional tone.
task achievement
You provided a clear introduction of yourself and your purpose for writing, which is excellent for establishing context.
greeting and closing
The letter concludes with a polite closing, which helps to maintain a formal tone.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite