The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts illustrate the percentage of

movies

produced and

compared

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compare

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it with the percentage of tickets

boughts

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bought

between 1996 and 2006 in a nation.

Overall

, there was a dramatic

rose

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rise

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in the percentage of

daram

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dream

films

produced

while

the

highst

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highest

number of ticket sales

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for

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comedy

movies

. there was a significant

decreased

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decrease

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in romance

movies

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apply

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both

producted

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products

and bought. The

amount

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number

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movies

released

were

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was

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higher in 2006 than in 1996. Drama

were

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was

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higher

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a higher

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kind of

films

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film

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produced it was around 25% in 1996

then

increased to 35%.

In contrast

, romance

were

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was

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the least

films

around 5%. The

pecentage

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percentage

movies

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movie

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tickes

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tickets

bought was highest in 2006. People

prefered

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preferred

to watch comedy

films

strated

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started

at 20%

then

had increased to just under 25% by 2006.

while

the least

movies

were fantasy under 5% in 1996 and romance 5% in 2006

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

143 words

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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