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The given line chart illustrates the figure for people who enjoyed in various activities at one place in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020,

The given line chart illustrates the figure for people who enjoyed in various activities at one place in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020,
The given line chart illustrates the
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 for people who enjoyed
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various activities
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 one place in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020,
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, the data on participants who participated in the film club was the highest. All of the activities gradually increased their
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 throughout the entire time frame, except amateur dramatics.
According to
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 the graph, there were approximately 65 individuals who were in the film club, and
this
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 dominated the top for over 20 years.
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this
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 were material arts and amateur dramatics, the number of participants in the former fluctuated at 35 citizens throughout the entire period,
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 that of the latter experienced a dramatic decline, from 28 in both 2000 and 2005 to less than 10 people in 2020. As regards table tennis,
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 number of players remained unchanged at 15 citizens between 2000 and 2010, but
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 it witnessed a plunge to 50 individuals
at the end
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 of the period.
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 musical performances started in 2005,
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 quickly rose to 15 people in 2020.

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