The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph demonstrated
outcome
of a survey Add an article
the outcome
how
people consume Change preposition
of how
coffee
and tea as a habit in five Australian cities in last
4 weeks.
At first glance, most citizens of Australia Correct article usage
the last
tended
to go to a cafe for tea or Wrong verb form
tend
coffee
. While
the number of people buying fresh and instant coffee
remained a minor consuming.
On the one hand, more than half of city residents in 4 four cities including Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart savoured coffee
and tea at a cafe. Among them, the highest percentage being in Melbourne and Hobart, accounting for a little below 65%. Moreover
, just slightly under 60% urban
residents in Adelaide went to a cafe in Change preposition
of urban
last
4 weeks.
Correct article usage
the last
On the other hand
, amount
of consuming fresh Correct article usage
the amount
coffee
in five cities made up
below 50%. City dwellers bought instant Verb problem
was
coffee
between 45% and 55%. Instant coffee
reached a peak at approximately 55% in HobartSubmitted by huy3072002 on
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