The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph demonstrated
outcome
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the outcome
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of a survey
how
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people consume
coffee
and tea as a habit in five Australian cities in
last
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4 weeks. At first glance, most citizens of Australia
tended
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to go to a cafe for tea or
coffee
.
While
the number of people buying fresh and instant
coffee
remained a minor consuming. On the one hand, more than half of city residents in 4 four cities including Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart savoured
coffee
and tea at a cafe. Among them, the highest percentage being in Melbourne and Hobart, accounting for a little below 65%.
Moreover
, just slightly under 60%
urban
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residents in Adelaide went to a cafe in
last
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4 weeks.
On the other hand
,
amount
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the amount
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of consuming fresh
coffee
in five cities
made up
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below 50%. City dwellers bought instant
coffee
between 45% and 55%. Instant
coffee
reached a peak at approximately 55% in Hobart
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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