The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates a report about the consumption of energy in the United
State
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States
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of America from 1980 to 2030 with a projection.
Overall
,
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the graph shows the petrol and oil
in addition
the coal increased during the same period,
while
the natural gas and nuclear, solar/wind
in addition
hydropower were approximately stable in the same period. From 1980 to 2030 provide information about three options which are nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower nearly the same
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a
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steady percentage,
However
,
next
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the next
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option is natural gas an upward trend opposite
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Correct word choice
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coal grew from almost 16 to nearly 27 per cent. The
last
option which is petrol and oil
is
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fluctuated until
reaches
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1995
then
touched the highest point in the year 2030.
Finally
, studies
provides
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show
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the
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that
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petrol and oil
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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higher
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at higher
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point
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points
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than
another
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other
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category of
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all
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, but the
lower
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lowest
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point
it
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is natural gas a steady.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
  • sustainable development
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