The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates a report about the consumption of energy in the United
State
of America from 1980 to 2030 with a projection.
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the graph shows the petrol and oil Verb problem
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in addition
the coal increased during the same period, while
the natural gas and nuclear, solar/wind in addition
hydropower were approximately stable in the same period.
From 1980 to 2030 provide information about three options which are nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower nearly the same apply
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a
steady percentage, Correct article usage
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However
, next
option is natural gas an upward trend opposite Correct article usage
the next
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coal grew from almost 16 to nearly 27 per cent.
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last
option which is petrol and oil is
fluctuated until Unnecessary verb
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reaches
1995 Verb problem
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then
touched the highest point in the year 2030.
Finally
, studies provides
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the
petrol and oil Correct determiner usage
that
is
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are
higher
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at higher
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points
another
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other
category of
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categories
all
, but the Correct pronoun usage
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lower
point Correct word choice
lowest
it
is natural gas a steady.Correct pronoun usage
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