The charts below show the proportion of students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show the proportion of students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the
percentage
of
students
at a particular university in England who were able to speak other languages
besides
English in the years 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, the proportion of the
students
who were fluent in Spanish only, another
language
and two other languages increased.
However
, there was a decline in the
percentage
of
students
who could speak French only and no other
language
.
To begin
with, the figure for the Spanish only saw an increase of 5% between 2000 and 2010.
Similarly
, the proportion of
students
who were able to speak another
language
rose from 15% to 20% in the subsequent ten years.
Moreover
, the
percentage
of the two other
language
speakers was 10% in 2000,
whereas
, it saw an increase to 15% in 2010.
In addition
, the figure for
students
who knew French only and no other
language
dropped by 5% and 10% respectively in 2010. It is worth noting that the
percentage
of
students
who could speak only in German levelled out at 10% in both years.
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