The two tables below show statistics of workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables

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the statistics of the United

states

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workforce

for both U.S. nationals and foreign

individual

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. In the following paragraphs , I will elaborate on the specific data to analyse the statistics .

Overall

, U.S. citizens have a higher

workforce

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all ages , which indicates the result of

a

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higher unemployment rates .

Fisrtly

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Firstly

, when analysing the data ,

it is clear that

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the

foreign birth

workers

for both females and males have a higher employment rate

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to the

overall

workforce

. When

further

examining the number of employments for different age categories for foreign birth

workers

,

total

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workers

for men

are

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much

more

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higher than the women .

Secondly

, in terms of the US birth

workers

have a

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higher

workforce

. We can see that the rate of unemployment is

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consistently

constantly

decreasing as the

individual

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individuals

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are aging.