Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provides information about the improvement of the countryside
as well as
the number of human beings in England were
constantly rose Unnecessary verb
apply
up
during the mid-year of the 19th century.
In overview, Change preposition
apply
Chorleywood
area developed during the year Correct article usage
the Chorleywood
of
1868 up to 1994 with the construction of infrastructure and the Change preposition
apply
increasement
of the population.
Correct your spelling
increase
To begin
with, in the year 1868, the society was very small and the main roads were already constructed, however
, in 1883, the state started to grew
up where they built many different housing surrounding a Change the verb
grow
round about
, motorway Correct your spelling
roundabout
as well as
railway line.Futhermore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
motorway
was introduced in the year Add an article
the motorway
a motorway
of
1970, Change preposition
apply
this
was because of the growth of the community so the
tried to minimise the congestion.
Correct your spelling
they
Moreover
, in 1922, apartments were constructed along the rails which was
built in 1909, Change the verb form
were
this
clearly shows that there was a great development since they started with roads until they reached their climax of managing to introduce a railway line with a busy train station.Lastly
, a park and golf course was located at the centre of Chorleywood village in the UK.Submitted by cajaah93 on
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