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Some people believe that it is better language students in small classes. Others think the number of people in the classes doesn't matter Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, it is widely argued that
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teacher
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students
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discuss
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students
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classes
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misunderstanding
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it is vital
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to
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 to learners because the
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a foreign
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affect
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enormous
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 that it does not consume as much
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 to establish order as in big
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classes
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grammar
Ensure to proofread your essay to correct spelling and grammatical mistakes. For instance, 'dicsuss' should be 'discuss' and 'clasess' should be 'classes.'
style
Work on structuring your sentences to avoid redundancy and make them clear and concise. For example, instead of saying, 'that saves a load of time to everyone from principal to learners,' you could say, 'saves time for both teachers and students.'
content
Expand on your examples and make them more specific to strengthen your arguments. Instead of just stating that smaller classes save time, you could explain how this extra time could be used effectively for more personalized teaching.
structure
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which frame your discussion well.
content
You addressed both viewpoints on the topic and provided your own opinion, fulfilling the task requirements.
content
You included relevant points to support each side of the argument, such as the importance of individual attention in smaller classes.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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