The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people taking holidays at home, abroad or both or no holidays for the year 2014 and 2015
The bar chart compares the proportion of Britons and how they spent their holidays, specifically domestic, foreign,
a
combination of the two or none, during 2014 and 2015.
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or a
Overall
, it was popular for British
people
to go for
vacation inside and outside Britain, followed by UK-only Change preposition
on
travels
and no holidays. Fix the agreement mistake
travel
In contrast
, travelling abroad for holiday
is the least popular option.
In terms of the most popular vacation locale, more than 40% of Correct article usage
a holiday
British
people
chose to travel both inside the UK and abroad in 2014 and 2015. Meanwhile, travelling abroad experienced the opposite trend with only 12% in 2014 before rising a negligible proportion in 2015.
In 2014, there were 20% of British
people
who
chose not to spend their holiday and after a one-year period, grew by nearly 2%. Contrastingly, 27% of Correct pronoun usage
apply
British
people
spent their holiday in the UK only during 2014 yet this
percentage fell to 22% in 2015.Submitted by ngocthuykatie on
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