The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The chart illustrates information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed , there are varying percentages between the ( salaries , technology , building and transport)
Overall
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, it shows that the biggest percentages are in the salaries in years 2017 and 2018 and the higher sources in the national government so it is 175.5 in 2017 and 177.8 in 2018 , there is no change in building and transport 17% in 2017 and 2018
also
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local taxes was 91.2 in 2017 but in 2018 it reached into 102.3 owning to the taxes change ,
lastly
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, technology has changed from 2017 till 2018 from 8% till 14%
due to
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the urgent need in 2018 . In sum , I could say that the biggest percentages spent are on salaries and the sources in the national government
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