The shown bar chart provides data on the total quantity of minutes of telephone calls in the United Kingdom between 1995 and 2002. The calls are divided into three categories and are denoted in billions.

The shown bar chart provides data on the total quantity of minutes of telephone calls in the United Kingdom between 1995 and 2002. The calls are divided into three categories and are denoted in billions.
The present bar chart compares data about the number of times that people used a telephone in 3 different items (Local, National and international, and mobile) in the UK from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
, the main time was for Local calls
instead
of cell phones. The number of people who used international and mobile increased
in
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a period of 7 years.
According to
the diagram, most of the time British used the telephone for local calls. In the beginning the local had 71
billion
minutes
;
then
this
trend rose to 1999, and touched the peak of 90
billion
minutes
;
however
, local reduced the number of
minutes
was absolutely the same as in 1995.
Nevertheless
, other categories had grown-up situations. National and international in 1995 had 38
billion
minutes
;
then
these had slight claims. For mobile we can see
an
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enormous growth, for at the start had 2
billion
minutes
, but in 2002 the figures became 46
billion
minutes
.
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